We’ve all read about the “beautiful” view, “charming” village, “glamorous” city, and “famous” landmark.
When you’re writing your website copy or blog posts, do you try to spice up your sentences with adjectives that just end up sounding … tired? If you want to wow your readers, you can’t write the same-old, same-old!
But where can you turn for writing inspiration for “wow”-worthy copy?
The first place to look is at what you clients are already reading — books, magazines, etc. See what kinds of word show up in headlines and intro paragraphs, because that’s the kind of copy your ideal client gravitates toward.
Let’s say you’re wondering how to get luxury travel clients. If you’re after more high-end clients, pull out some luxury magazines and make a list of the adjectives writers are using to add more flavor to their articles.
Or … just read the rest of this blog post, because I already did the work for you! I combed through some top luxury leisure and travel magazines — including Condé Nast Traveler, Travel + Leisure, Veranda, and Garden & Gun — to see what words really stuck out. If you’re trying to appeal to luxury travelers, refer to the following lists when you’re writing your own copy to break away from the travel clichés.
BEAUTIFUL:
Talking about a beautiful place, be it a city, a view, or a building? Spice up your copy with these words:
Graceful
Refined
Stunning
Elegant
Luxe
Sophisticated
Scintillating
Harmonious
Mystical
Bewitching
CHARMING:
Highlighting a charming village? Change up your diction with these words:
Patina
Magical
Rustic
Cheerful
Romantic
Whimsical
Quirky
Kitschy
GLAMOROUS:
Writing about a glamorous city, restaurant, or bar? Entice readers with these words:
Sparkling
Chic
Shimmering
Vibrant
Cosmopolitan
Edgy
Posh
High-octane
Sexy
Eye-popping
Trendy
Tony
FAMOUS:
Directing your reader’s attention to a famous landmark? Try one of these words instead:
Storied
Iconic
Legendary
Here’s to better, more attention-grabbing writing — the kind that attracts your dream luxury travel clients!
Got any other good “luxury” synonyms for the words above? Share them with us in the comments!
Pam Smithgall says
Great comments! Thanks!
Emily Matras says
Thanks for reading, Pam!
Pam Smithgall says
So much good info! Thanks!
Lucy Cichon says
Great article – words do matter!
Thanks!
Michele Schwartz says
Very helpful. Thank you so much! My copy is looking sexier already!
Jackie Lamothe says
Great idea, Emily! Thank you for sharing this mini travel thesaurus!
Sandy says
Just saw this. Excellent!
Lois Wallace says
great Emily,
But how about the word Luxury itself I think sometimes people use that word too often.
What is Luxury to one is not to another. ?
Thought of wording to use that would bring in the Lux big-spending client plus the upscale ones.
Hope you get my meaning.
Lee Lennon says
Thanks Emily! Looking for to your updates. These words help with writing newsletters as well! Perfect timing – as usual.